It all started with my money. My jewels and precious stones went next, followed rapidly by my artworks. I lost my armies next – all my elephants, chariots, horses and foot soldiers. Then I lost my palaces and my ancestral home. My clothes went next and then my pride. I lost my family next before finally losing myself.
I had lost it all in a matter of hours.
Now, as I sit alone, penniless, homeless and humbled, I realize I have lost something else. Something I should have lost at the very beginning.
I lost my gambling addiction!
Word Count: 98
Written for Master of Writing Flash Fiction Challenge Week 3
Image Credit: https://www.jw.org/en/publications/magazines/watchtower-study-june-2017/can-you-look-beyond-outward-appearances/
Just got here and already a fan of your stories!
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Thanks so much, Mariam! 😀
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I like the way you combined two challenges into one story. 😉
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Hahaha! XD
Nice spot! 😛
Thank you! 🙂
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I like where you were going with this. Ought to tighten a few screws and enter this into a contest. There are a few good 100-worder’s out there – might have some luck!
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Thank You! 🙂
Could you suggest a few, please?
I would love to enter my works! 😀
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I say ‘go big or go home’ – enter it in the Atom Bomb contest: https://fictionwar.submittable.com/submit
Here’s another decent resource – just stick with the ones that have word limits close to your story. Otherwise you’ll be unfairly matched up with other stories that have the benefit of, say, 1000 words.
http://www.christopherfielden.com/short-story-tips-and-writing-advice/flash-fiction-competitions.php
Keep me posted on how it goes and good luck!
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Thanks a lot, Paul! 😀
Will definitely keep you posted! 🙂
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awwww 😦
it’s really good
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Thank You! 😀
Glad you liked it! 🙂
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always, keep writing man 🙂
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Definitely! 😀
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Great story and meaningful too as I know of 2 personal friends who committed crimes to get monies to gamble. They have been imprisoned and it devastated families.
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I am sorry to hear that…
That is quite horrid! 😦 😦
It is a sad addiction!!
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Yup! Gambling and drugs are bad vices.
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In complete agreement with you!
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☺
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Oh… my… god. ..
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Hahaha! I hope that was the good variety!!
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It’s the if-this-were-real reaction…. was not expecting that ending. great piece!
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Hahaha! 😀
Thank You! 🙂
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Wow.. This is awesomely written
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Thanks a lot! 😀
Glad you liked it!
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Brilliant. I’m enjoying your stories.
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Thank You! 😀
I am delighted that I could make that happen! 🙂
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https://wordpress.com/read/blogs/143724618/posts/972#comment-831
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Well said. It’s a horrible addiction.
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In complete agreement!
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Nicely crafted tale.
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Thanks a lot! 🙂
Do keep visiting! 😀
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I struggle with fiction and am excited to have learned about this weekly challenge – your story was amazing and inspirational ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Donna!! 😀
It feels awesome that I could inspire you! 🙂 🙂
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