This is my attempt at merging prompts and linking my posts to form a larger story! 🙂
The chapters in the story may not link sequentially, so will keep updating the sequence.
I hope this experiment goes well!
This story is a prequel to an earlier work. Do read the sequel if you liked this one! 😀
“Can you come here for a second?”
I could hear my wife calling out to me from the porch.
“Do I have to come dear? The match is getting real interesting. We have the lead for the very first time this season.”
My wife had this habit of calling me out to see things that she thought she saw. We were both old now, but I thank God my vision was not as poor as her vision, and that my imagination was not as vivid. Last week she had screamed that she had seen an intruder in our fields. It had turned out to be our own scarecrow. I wasted so much energy running out with my gun.
“Dear, please come.”
I almost got up from the couch, ready to go out. Right at that moment, the score equalized. I could not get up now. My team needed me to sit until the match was over.
“I’ll be right there, dear.”
“I can see bright lights over the hills beyond our fields.”
I had already tuned her voice out.
Next part: Flash Fiction: Buried
Word Count: 179
Prompts used:
Thursday photo prompt: Conflagration #writephoto
Time To Write: Sentence Starter 35
Thanks for reading!
Would love any feedback! 😀
I like this, you’ve left enough room for the reader to interpret the narrative.
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Thank You! 🙂
Hopefully I can transform the narrative into a long story! 😀
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Interesting idea linking bits into a larger story, I’m about to read the next part and I’m curious about how it will turn out. Good luck.
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Thank You, Lucas! 🙂
I do hope it goes well!
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I went back to read the sequel and founda whole story developing 😉
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Awesome!! 🙂
Glad it appears that way!
I do hope it turns out well! 😀
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It doesn’t sound as if it is going to for your characters 😉
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Hahahaha! XD
True that! 😉
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😀
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Uh oh. Actually, I know how he feels but this time it was a mistake.
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A huge mistake!! 😛
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What could it be? < that element of your storytelling makes them so readable.
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Thank You, Lion!! 🙂
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Great lead in and looking forward to more
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Will definitely get more! 🙂
Thanks for visiting! 😀
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This stands alone, no need to add to it. Good story!
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Thanks so much, Jane! 🙂
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🙂
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This is certainly an interesting start and nicely written. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Rachel! 🙂
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