This is my attempt at merging prompts and linking my posts to form a larger story! 🙂
The chapters in the story may not link sequentially, so will keep updating the sequence.
I hope this experiment goes well!
This is the sequence till now: Flash Fiction: Bright Lights -> Flash Fiction: Hill Top (You are here) -> Flash Fiction: Buried
On to the story! 😀
See anything, Bob?
“No, Harry. There is just too much fog here. I think it was another prank call. Burning lights on the hill. What shit …wait. I see something. Checking it out.”
Roger.
“I can see a decoration of flags here. Seems like some picnic or local event. No people in sight though.”
Be cautious, Bob and keep your walkie working. No radio silence.
“Roger that. Keeping my gun ready as well, just in case.”
Good decision. Anything else you see?
“Just the trees, rocks and more fog. Not a soul in sight, Harry.”
Call it in. Maybe someone saw party lights and reported it.
“Possible. Wait, I hear something. Footsteps approaching.”
Be careful.
….
Bob?
….
Are you okay?
….
I’m sending backup.
“No need for that. I’m okay.”
I had told you to keep reporting in. You had me worried there. Who was it?
“Just some foreigners….”
Word Count: 150
Prompts used:
Image: Kangra Valley, India © Gaurav Goyal, Google Maps
Reminds me of the WIllie and Joe cartoon where they’re in France and notice that there “sure are a lot of furrigners here.”
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Ah!
I had no idea about this cartoon strip! 🙂
Thanks for introducing me to it! 😀
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Ominous story! I got a little chuckle at the end. I think the foreigners must be us. Great to see you on Pegman 🙂
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Good sense of the two rangers’ fear, in a place they don’t know. Guess they didn’t look in any travel guides beforehand ? !
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Indeed! 😛
Thank You! 🙂
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Great tension here. Leaves me wondering what happened during those moments of radio silence, and what exactly he saw!
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Thank You, Joy! 🙂
More on that coming up!
The other linked stories will serve as clues! 😀
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As Joy says, we wonder what Harry saw in the minutes of radio silence. Is he now speaking under duress? Has he been changed by alien technology? Or is everything just as it seems on the surface?
You do a good job of raising the tension through the story.
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Thanks a lot! 🙂
I think it is something more ominous than that! 😛
Clues in the linked posts!!
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Sorry Netizen
I don’t read linked flash stories to make a whole. There’s too much to read and comment on as it is!
Best wishes
Penny
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Fair enough! 🙂
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I too wondered if something sinister had happened in those moments of radio silence. Aliens or a supernatural force are my best guesses! Nice tale
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Thank You, Lynn! 😀
Your first guess is on mark! 🙂
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My pleasure
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Great suspense.
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Thank You! 🙂
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