Find the prequels here:
Part 1- Flash Fiction: Broken Fence
Part 2 – Flash Fiction: The Tree
Part 3 – Flash Fiction: Revenge 1
It was sunset, Charlotte’s time to sneak out.
As per his habit, her father would come home drunk, lock her in her room and drink some more in the hall downstairs.
Charlotte would make her way down, go through the dark alleys, and meet up with her partners in crime, without her intoxicated father realizing she was missing.
This time though, she would not make it, as her footing slipped and she landed on picket fence.
Charlotte’s body lay skewered on the now bloody fence.
Only one remained now, and then the Witch’s revenge would be complete.
Word Count: 96
Prompts:
Six Sentence Story “Habit”
The Dark Netizen 
I had to go back and read the other stories prior to this one to learn more about the witch.
Well written SSS, and I suspect there will be another one coming to take care of those partners in crime.
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Thanks a lot! 😀
I hope you enjoyed the other parts as well!
Yes, there is one more coming! 🙂
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You describe the dysfunctional relationship between Charlotte and her father very well. I’m not surprised she fell on the fence, even if a witch weren’t involved!
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Thanks so much, Penny! 😊
Indeed..it was risky sneaking out like that
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Oh, my goodness! That’s a bloody picture 😦
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It is!!
Would never want to see it in person!!
Thanks for visiting! 🙂
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The fence piercing the body was descriptive enough. I liked your story, dark
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Thanks a lot! 😀
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Finishing them off, one by one. Great suspense as we wait for the next one!
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Thanks a lot! 😀
The last one will go down pretty soon! 😛
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A gruesome end! I wonder how long it took her father to sober up and find her?
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Took quite a while! 😦
But, the witch still has a hand to play before that happens
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Aw, now I feel bad for her. It was easy to cheer for the witch when the troublemakers were faceless but her home life seemed to sucked and no wonder she went out. Nice job you made me feel bad people who aren’t real. Sign of a good writer.
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Eeww, skewered on the fence. This is quite the ongoing tale! That witch is not to be crossed for sure.
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Definitely not one to be trifled with!
Thanks for reading! 😀
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A well crafted episode.
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Thank You! 🙂
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Ugh, what a way to go!
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Really gory!!
Thanks for visiting! 🙂
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Think that’s enough to sober up her father?
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Oh it should be!
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Great linking of the stories. I do not know which is worse, the drunk or the witch,
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Thanks a lot, Michael! 🙂
Both are equally bad in their own way!
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The last two revenge entries are particularly gruesome, but well-written. I will certainly remember not to break a witch’s fence!
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Yes, stay away from witches! 😉
Thanks so much for reading! 😀
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Good advice! 🙂
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Hahaha! 😉
Aye! 😀
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Good Six. Good Story. Like the idea of flash fiction. (yeah, reading to learn, again!.
Economy of words without sacrificing the ‘visual’ and allowing the Reader to get theyselves engaged in the story.
I enjoyed it.
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Thanks so much, Clark! 😀
You put it really nicely! Glad you enjoyed it! 😀
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Very entertaining, nice on going story. A little creepy. But that’s good! They’re supposed to be 😀
You have me wondering how old is this witch. Your description of her tree as trophy cabinet kind of made my skin crawl lol
Well done Six!
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Thanks so much! 😀
This witch is really really old! 😉
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Oh my. Scary.
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Glad you think so! 🙂
Thank You! 😀
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Reblogged this on Anniegoose's Blog.
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Nice job!
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Thank You! 😊
Do check out the finale… Flash Fiction: Revenge 3
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I will. 🙂
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Awesome! 😀
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Such a sad, dark heritage for this family.
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Indeed! 😦
Thanks for stopping by! 😀
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Oh, my – compelling! I’ll have to catch up with the rest of the series. Thank you for following BrewNSpew.
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Most welcome! 😀
I look forward to getting your feedback! 🙂
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wow, with this kind of writing I think you could do well to write for TV and movie productions. You’d be better than a lot of stuff out there. Have you tried to do anything in that direction?
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Wow!! Thanks so much for saying this! 🙂
Maybe I will get into it sometime..
For now it is on hold though
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