I love beaches, and make it a point to take a sunset stroll everyday.
On my walks last week, I spotted a lady every day. She would sit at the same spot, leaving a trail of her footprints in the sand. She would just sit and gaze at the sea. In her eyes, I could spot a fierce longing.
Every day passed, and every day I saw her at the same spot. I would pass by wordlessly. However, yesterday my curiosity got the better of me. I walked up to her.
“The sea is beautiful isn’t it, miss?”
She answered without giving me a glance.
“It is. Don’t you feel that we are rather unfortunate?”
I could not fathom why she would have said that while taking in such a lovely view.
“Why unfortunate?”
“Because we were born with legs.”
She let out a long sigh. I nodded at her and continued on my way.
Today, when I walked up to the same spot, I did not see her there. However, I did spot footsteps in the sand.
Footsteps that transformed into a single line in the sand, which disappeared into the sea…
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Prompts:
FLASH FICTION FOR THE PURPOSEFUL PRACTITIONER- 2018 WEEK #30
She gazed at the sea speechless. π
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Lovely! π
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She gazed at the sea speechless. π
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Thanks so much! π
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She became a mermaid? Or was she dragged into the sea by a giant tentacle? π
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Too funny
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XD
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The latter is way more interesting!! π
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Ha ha lol
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As I started on this tall tale/tail my first thought was she was blind, but then I thought she’d pretty skilled if she can take the same path everyday. It’s lovely she was able to transform and go where she longed to go. May we all be so lucky.
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Indeed!!
I hope we can all do that! π
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A whale of a tail. π
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Hahaha..Nice one! π
Thank You!! βΊοΈ
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Oh, I liked this! Very clever!
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Thanks a lot, Liz!! π
Do keep visiting! π
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So good! Lovely one!
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Thanks a lot! π
I hope you keep visiting for more! π
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Loved it π
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Thanks so much!!! π€π
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this is so whimsical and beautiful, I cannot stop smiling.
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Thanks so much!! π
I am glad it brought a smile to your face!! π
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Loved the ending! Well done. Thanks for participating this week.
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