They promised it would cause my evolution, made me comfortable about volunteering for it.
I was placed on the table, surrounded by them, being observed like a fish in a tank.
The cap was taken off the syringe, and the liquid was injected into me.
I felt nothing, maybe the whole exercise was a farce.
But then, it hit me with a sudden blast, spread through my body with great speed, burning me from within
After the pain had faded and I had looked at their faces, I realised that I had transformed, but not into what they expected….
(The story continues in ‘The Statues’ series. Jump into it right here: Twittering Tale: Statues)
Word Count: 99
Prompts:
Masters of Writing Flash Fiction Challenge Week 15
Six Sentence Story “Transform”
FOWC with Fandango “Comfortable”
(Image Credit: https://www.cgwallpapers.com/wallpapers.php?id=650)
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wow
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wow
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Great use of those words.
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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Intriguing.
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Thank You! 🙂
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Well done!
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Thank You! 😀
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You’re welcome.
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Yes man, perfect lite fiction and twist.
I feel you encapsulated a lot of comic book origins and compacted it neatly.
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Thanks so much, Lion!! 😀
Comic book origins were an inspiration..yes!! 🙂
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Very impressive and creative writing to be able to incorporate all those different prompt words in your story! Wow, indeed!
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Thanks so much, Pat! 😀
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Very creative very vivid very real good 6
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Thanks so much, UP! 😀
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But… now what?
(Great Six by the way)
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Now there will be hell to pay! 😛
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excellent wordifying, yo
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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It sounds like just the beginning.
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It is! 😉
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I’m wanting another six sentences, to know what transformation occurred.
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Sure! 😀
Will write it soon! 🙂
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Now that’s a cliffhanger! Don’t leave us in suspense too long 😀
Well done Six!
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Thanks so much!! 😀
I promise it will be taken forward! 😀
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