“Whoa! What is that?”
Ethan had taken his little sister for camping. He looked at his little sister pointing up at the astronomical expanse. He could see what she was referring to.
“That is a comet.”
“A comet? What are those?”
Ethan adored his little sister. However, the way she asked so many questions about everything annoyed him to no end. He decided to have some fun.
“A comet is an alien flying so fast, that its ass starts burning, and it leaves a trail.”
“So cool!! We spotted an alien.”
*Many miles above*
“How did the earthling know?”
Word Count: 99
Prompt:
Carrot Ranch August 16 Flash Fiction Challenge
Image Credit: “The Comet”Β Β artwork by Edward Hagedorn
Nice!
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Thanks! π
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Ha!
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Ha ha ha. I’ll remember that for when I next see a comet! Love the pic too.
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Thanks so much, Chris! π
I would love to tell my little sister this! XD
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A cool twist right at the end.
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Glad it landed!
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The good thing is little “sis” believes everything.
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The Twist!! Nice!! π
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Thank You, Ramya! π
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Just a wild shot in the dark!
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Hahaha! π
Aye! π
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This is such a fun story!π
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Glad you enjoyed! π
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A lucky hunch, ha, ha! Oh, big brothers…!
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Glad to be one! XD
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Cute one
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The ass man comet-h
She lisped. π
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Cute! π
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The ass man comet-h
She lisped. π
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Cute! π
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