She loves the sunsets, the mountains, the clouds, the breeze caressing her face, all in all she loves the scenic appeal when on a date.
She she should find the ambience nothing less than perfect, with a set table, complete with a bottle of wine, glasses, and a cozy set up, which I know she will enjoy.
There she stands, soaking in the sunset, looking gorgeous in her pretty white dress that sways in the wind, and now all that remains, is one little push…
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Nice and so beautifully written.
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Thanks so much! 😀
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Welcome.
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What a lucky gal. Heh. This was lovely.
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😉
She gets a quick trip to the next world!
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That truly was the … sunset !
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Hahaha! 😉
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Fabulous. Your twist made me laugh!
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I am glad it did! 😉
Thank You, Chris! 😀
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Wicked and unexpected.
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Thank You, Di! 😀
Glad the twist landed!
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By now, I know not to judge the story’s flow until the last line, you always throw a hairpin turn at the end! 😁
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Hahaha! 😉
Thank You, Sonali! 😀
I like bringing in twists!
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Evil
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Bwahahahaha! 😉
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You just couldn’t resist that drop, could you? 🙂 Nice twist at the end
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Hahahaha! Aye! XD
I can’t say about the lady, but I love good ‘drops’! 😉
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Twisted nicely !
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Thanks so much! 😀
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Twist in the last three words, wicked.
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Thank You! 😀
I am glad it landed!
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I really enjoyed this. I read a Koontz book about twenty years where a guy takes his girlfriend on a hike and they were having a great time until he gave her the push. I know it’s weird but I enjoy stories like this because I’m always asking why. Why would someone do that? Very nice!
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Thank You! 😀
Yes, I get the why part! I ask myself the question almost all the time! 😀
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Beautifully written. Love that ending! Nicely done!
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Thanks so much! 😀 😀
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Poor lady…
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Indeed! 😦
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