It was all in her eyes.
Our paths crossed in the bazaar. She was standing at the wine merchant’s, drawing no attention to herself. As I waited for the merchant to fetch my wine, I happened to gaze upon her face. Having seen exotic beauties, I thought nothing special of it. However, my thoughts changed once I saw her eyes. Those sapphire blue eyes. She did not attempt to look away. I felt as if my heart was about to stop, the way she was looking at me. Everything else began fading into darkness. The bazaar sounds lulled. I could only see her eyes. I did not see who did it, but someone pulled her and dragged her away. I snapped out from my trance, all my senses returned to me. I caught my reflection in the merchant’s mirror. I looked paler than snow.
Beware those soul stealers, her eyes…
Word Count: 150
Prompt:
#TellTaleThursday – 17th January 2019
#TellTaleThursday with Anshu & Priya
Good story. You’ve done a great job creating a setting, characters, and dynamic plot in just a few words. I could really “see” the story unfold. So vivid.
Thanks for liking my blog post earlier. I appreciate it!
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Thanks so much, Meredith! 😀
Itt was my pleasure reading your post! 🙂
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Wow, excellent!
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Thanks so much! 😀
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What a narration! I could actually sense myself in the bazaar too! Good job! And welcome to #TellTaleThursday
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Thanks so much, Anshu! 🙂
Glad to be on board! 😀
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that was gripping- soul stealers loved that word..
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Thanks so much, Akshata! 🙂
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She does sound like a soul stealer. Loved your narration. Welcome to #TellTaleThursday.
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Thanks so much, Priya! 🙂
Glad to be a part!!
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The sounds of the bazaar ring in my ears. Those eyes are pure magic and having peeped into them it leaves one in a trance.
https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.com/2019/01/the-mesmerizing-eyes.html
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So true! 🙂
Gorgeous eyes!!
Thanks so much! 🙂
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Nice story. Transient sight, lasting impression.
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Beautiful, but haunting.
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Engaging and haunting! Interesting build up to the story.
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