“Mama, there’s someone under my bed!”
Mom leaned in closer to her daughter.
“What did you say sweetie?”
She whispered to mom.
“Under my bed. There is someone there.”
Mom sighed.
“We have been through this before, Nancy. There is no one there.”
“But there is, mom. He is there every night.”
Mom rolled her eyes.
“Okay, I am going to check it one more time. See..here I go down. And as I said, there is no one here.”
Nancy huffed. Mom kissed her on the forehead.
“Good night, sweetie. Sleep well.”
“Good night, mommy.”
After mom had left, Nancy spoke aloud.
“She still can’t see you. This is wrong.”
“She will, someday….”
Came a soft voice from under the bed…
Word Count: 123
Prompt:
Oh, now I wonder who the invisible someone might be. I’d guess, nothing evil. 🙂
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Nothing evil, yes! 🙂
Not yet at least! 😉
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I thought by that end conversation, nothing evil. Yet the potential is there.
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this is creeeeepy, but I like it 😉 🙂
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Thanks so much, Pia! 😀 😀
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Classic!
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Aye aye! 🙂
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The ending took the scary out of this. Must be a friendly ghost/alien/monster.
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Friendly for now! 😉
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I would have had the monster grab the mom. That’s the way I think.
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The monster’s waiting! 😉
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Brilliant!✌
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Thank You! 😀 😀
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Little kids with their innocence can see things that adults can’t. Nice story.
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So true! 😀
Thanks so much! 🙂
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Oh God, this is so creeeepy…!! Well done!
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A nicely narrated story that created all the required built up with a classic twist at the end. Loved it!
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Thanks so much, Rrohan! 😀
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Casper the friendly ghost…I wonder! Spook yet adorable take on the prompt.
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Thanks so much, Anagha! 😀
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creepy and hope mom sees the creature under the bed.
https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.com/2019/01/someone.html
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I think she will, soon! 🙂
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Will your story be continued, Kalpana?
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