The dry breeze stings my face.
This sand, this air, are slowly choking the life out of me. I want to get back to my old life. I had power, I had purpose, but most importantly, I had freedom. Here, I feel trapped. My injuries did not kill me, merely forced me to retire. However, I wish I had died before I retired. I wish I was buried at the sea, like a true captain.
I long for the darkness to find me, as much as I long for the sea mist to caress my face, one last time.
Word Count: 99
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Fascinating and imaginative take on the photo prompt.
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Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks so much, Susan! 😀 🙂
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nice take on the prompt
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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Great character here
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Thanks so much, Neil! 🙂
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That was a beautiful take on the prompt.
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Thank You, Suchita! 🙂
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Such longing, the captain and his proper death.
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I hope he finds what he is seeking! 🙂
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