Conversation Haiku: Break In

We Need To Break In,
By Breaking The Wall? No Need.
The Gate Isn’t Locked!


Prompt:

Thursday photo prompt: Invitation #writephoto

 

Well, I tried something different here. I took the haiku structure, and tried to fit in a conversation in there. Did the experiment work? Or did it just feel like a weird haiku? Would really like to know your thoughts and critical comments on this piece.

Happy reading! 🙂

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