We Need To Break In,
By Breaking The Wall? No Need.
The Gate Isn’t Locked!
Prompt:
Thursday photo prompt: Invitation #writephoto
Well, I tried something different here. I took the haiku structure, and tried to fit in a conversation in there. Did the experiment work? Or did it just feel like a weird haiku? Would really like to know your thoughts and critical comments on this piece.
Happy reading! 🙂
The Dark Netizen 
It works for me, though it is non-traditional…I have no problem with that.
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Thank You! 😀
I am glad it seems okay! 🙂
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🙂
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I thought your experiment very well done. While not exactly pure in form, yea, it works. 🙂
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Thanks so much! 😀
Hopefully this leads somewhere! 🙂
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Indeed, I feel inclined to use it.
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Whoa!! 😀
Do let me know when you do! 🙂
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You follow my blog, you’re bond to see it.
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Aye aye! 🙂
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That was easy.
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Unexpectedly for them! 😉
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I like the unusual 💜
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Thanks so much! 😀
I am glad this experiment worked for you! 🙂
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💜
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