“Father, why do we do this, every equinox?”
Father placed his palm on my head.
“You will receive your answer today, son.”
I nodded excitedly. I emulated what I had done all the previous nine years. I placed both my hands on the stone pillar.
“All set, father.”
Father did the same.
“Now listen, son. Every equinox, the dark ones threaten to invade us from their dimension. We unleash the soul pillar’s power to shield earth.”
I stood awestruck looking at the skies….
Word Count: 83
Prompts:
Weekend Writing Prompt #97 – Equinox
What Pegman Saw March 16, 2019
Neat.
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Thank You! 😀
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A classic coming of age story, where the youngster becomes a warrior.
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Oh yes! 😀
Thank You! 🙂 🙂
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Oooh, good job! I thought this prompt was super hard.
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It was a tough one! 😉
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Nice take!
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An interesting take on the prompt. Boy gets accepted into the world of men.
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He had a lot of growing up to do! 🙂
Thanks so much! 😀
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Nice one!
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Thank You, Mama Buzz! 😀
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I love this! Might have to try the whole microfiction thing.
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I am glad you liked it, Bessie! 🙂
I would love to read your work in microfiction! 🙂
Following you now, hoping to catch it! 😀
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Interesting ritual seen through the initiate’s eyes. It begs the question: what does he see? The shield, or an army of alien spaceships. Intriguing.
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Thanks so much! 😀
I would like to believe he saw glimpses of both! 🙂
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Great read!
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Thanks so much, Rachel! 🙂
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Great story. I wonder if this will keep on working or if something will go awry?
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I hope it keeps on working! 🙂
Or else there will be a huge battle to fight!
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🙂
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Fantastical. What a great concept!
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Thanks so much! 😀 🙂
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