Cool Water Showers,
In Between The Summer Blaze,
Bring Needed Respite…
Prompt:
The Dark Netizen
Short Stories and Poems – Mostly dark ones!
Cool Water Showers,
In Between The Summer Blaze,
Bring Needed Respite…
Prompt:
The Dark Netizen 
“But if just drizzle
It adds moisture to the heat
And then there are sweat showers”
My hometown (Jaipur) is experiencing pre-monsoon showers these days, and your piece evoked these thoughts. When I’m done writing this comment, I’m gonna stare at the ceiling fan right above me and figure out where the air is running off to! 😅😁
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Um, the last line of my supposed haiku is to be “Then only sweat rains”. In my excitement, I forgot the haiku syllable rules. 😶
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This is even perfect as an haiku! 😀
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This is even perfect as a haiku! 😀
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Your comment rings so true! 🙂
I hope it begins raining in earnest! 😀 😀
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #7: The Dark Netizen’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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