Microfiction: Pain of the Past

He gave a grimace of pain as he watched the wreckage.

The memories almost brought about an emotional burst, but he managed to stabilize himself.

His failed suicide attempt was in the past…

Word Count: 33


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  1. I’ve never had a crack at micro-fiction….yet! As Abe said, reads almost like poetic dark reflection in a mind contemplating a failed suicide. Is he happy about the miss or not though? Yes it’s in the past, but the emotional burst almost came back. Can it be stabilised forever? Always questions lol


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