It was their first time in a seaplane.
The Theeves excitedly looked out of the windows as they sped along the coastline. They ooohed and aaahed at the natural beauty of the views. It was turning out to be their best trip and getting the seaplane now looked like a brilliant idea. As they landed, Mr. Theeve turned to his wife.
“Well, wasn’t that fun?”
She smiled and nodded.
“Yes, darling. It was the best.”
Mr. Theeve kissed his wife.
“Now, we need to get rid of this plane, before they track us down and jail us for stealing it…”
Word Count: 100
Prompt:
Friday Fictioneers 2nd August 2019
PHOTO PROMPT © Ted Strutz
The Dark Netizen 
Love the finishing line. And there you had me believing you were writing it straight. And how boring would that have been? Nice twist. Enjoyed.
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Haha! Loved the twist. And loved that it was a crime story that was just for fun!
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This would make a good premise for a comedy-action movie.
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Appropriate sounding name it seems for these two! 🙂
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I took a #12 bus home from work last night.
Scared the Hell out of me.
I’ve never driven a bus before.
Cute story! 😉
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Good twist to the ending! Great story.
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Oh, that ending made me laugh, it was so unexpected! 🙂
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Best of luck with that! A really amusing twist.
My tale – ‘Plane sailing!’
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Great read & twist.
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Nice twist at the end.
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Hilarious!
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Nice twist in the end. There was excitement of beautiful scenery and the thrill of stealing a plane.
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Oh no! Mr. THIEVE (very clever) didn’t think all the way through to the end. I enjoyed your story and chuckled!
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A well-written story with a great ending twist, DN. I wondered about the surname Theve. Humorous. 😀 — Suzanne
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The spelling of their name was the first clue that this was going to have a fun ending 🙂 Well done!
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cute
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