Microprose: Sinking Sword

Splash! Relief flooded over him as his sword entered the river.

It’d made him invincible. The world’s most powerful man. If only he could be called man, with his hollow eyes, gaunt skin and decrepit features. As the sword sunk, his vitality rose.

He was alive, again.


Word Count: 47

Prompt:

YeahWrite #447 Microprose Challenge

13 comments

  1. Ooo, I like your word choices here. They give us the backstory without any real exposition. You also do a really great job illustrating the before and the after – why the loss of the sword matters.

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