She hides from him – his hungry eyes and itching hands.
She hides silently, waiting for him to come closer.
She hides, but the scars on her back and the bruises on her legs stand exposed
She hides with bated breath, listening closely to his approaching steps.
She hides, as he calls out to her in his sickening, singsong voice.
She hides the blade behind her back, right until the moment he is in range.
The knife plunges deep, penetrating into his shallow soul.
Now, she hides no more.
Word Count: 88
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Very strong and powerful message. Thanks for joining in
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Thanks so much! π
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A pleasure
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Such tension in so few words, loved it. “Shallow soul,” that’s great.
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Thanks so much Priscilla! π Although he was much worse than that!
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Eep! Hopefully he had it coming, eh?
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He definitely had it coming!!
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Fabulous! I love the repetition and the growing tension.
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Thanks so much Chris! π
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Enjoyed it
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Glad you enjoyed, Queen Sina! π
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Wow! Lots of tension and love the twist in the end β€ thank you for sharing!
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Thanks so much!! π₯°
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Brilliant as always man!
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Thanks so much mate!
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Good grief, I was reading and anticipating! What will she do???? Nice pice..
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Thank You, Efrona! π
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That is a fabulous write! Superb take on the prompt.
Loved it. ππππ
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Thanks so much, Sir! π
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A pleasure dost! Cheers! π
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Awesome one!
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Thanks so muchπ₯°
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