It hurt so much.
It all started with so much pressure on me, pressure that crushed me from all sides.
The pressure molded me, built me up into what I am now, but at the heavy cost of my identity.
Then I was brought out into the light, rid of the darkness and pressure; but I found only momentary peace.
I was broken, cut, scratched and polished all over, inducing excruciating pain, and then it was done.
It hurts so much becoming a shining diamond.
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It’s a really good piece.
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Brilliant..
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Thank You! 🙂
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Clever, are you being literal or is it a metaphor for progress?
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Ah..nice catch! 🙂
I planned it as a both a literal and a metaphor..
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Very well executed then.
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Thanks a lot!!😊
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Some take more polishing than others! Good post, very visual. Thanks for sixing with us today!
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Thank You!! 😀
My pleasure sixing with you! 🙂
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Aha! You had me going there thinking, “where in the world is this going? This is….kinda dark”. Well done Six Sentence! So glad you linked up 🙂
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Thanks so much!! 😀
I do love the format!!
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Well written
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Thank You! 🙂
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Another very clever one!
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Thank You!! 🙂
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Wow. 😮 Makes me think of the quote, “No pain, no gain.”
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Thanks so much! 😀
The quote is so apt over here! 🙂
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I love this! Kinda made me think of a birth… both the mum and the baby come out transformed!
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Oh wow! 🙂
That’s a lovely way to look at it.
Thanks so much! 😀
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