The suitcase lay abandoned on the forsaken track.
The reason why this railroad was deserted and operations were abandoned was because people feared the cursed area. Anyone who ventured out on the track, would never return. Entire trains had disappeared, simply vanishing into thin air. People believed the abandoned suitcase was the only remaining sign of some poor soul who had joined the ranks of the missing people. However, there always remained some foolhardy bravehearts who would go looking for the suitcase.
They did not know that the suitcase had been placed there, by those living in the tunnel.
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So scary…. and congratulations for this
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Thanks so much, Sana! 😀
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Ur welcome
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Oh wow… The last line really caught me. 😀
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Thanks a lot!! 🙂
Do keep visiting! 😀
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What a great story!
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Thanks so much!! 😀
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Loved it! Great usage of words, well done!
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Thanks a lot, Bobby!! 😀
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I was hoping the suitcase would be eating up people, and trains 🙂
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😉
That’s super scary!
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I feel like you two should not be talking to one another! 😀
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Hahaha! XD
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Ha ha ha
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nice one!
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Thank You! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Anniegoose's Blog and commented:
oooooh
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Thank You! 😀
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ooooooooooooooh
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😉
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A mark of good horror writing is when you let the reader imagine what lurks in the dark. Good job!
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Thanks so much, Charli! 🙂
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