Looking at the door nervously, I backed up into the kitchen.
“Mom!”
She replied with a quick hmmm, refusing to divert her attention away from the vegetables she was chopping.
“It’s the door!”
She dropped down her knife and rushed towards the door. I could see the colour draining from her face.
“Call up Father Lorenzo. Tell him the paper charms are coming off.”
I nodded and took a step back. Before dialling the number on my phone I turned to mom.
“Mom, does this mean dad woke up?”
Mom stared at me.
“Yes, my child! And he is hungry!”
Word Count: 100
Prompt:
I really liked the perception of the duct tape as charms
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Thanks so much! 😀
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That was a good idea – paper charms. I’m a bit worried about the father figure though.
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He is one to fear alright!! 😦
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Wow! Deliciously chilling take on the photo prompt. Brilliantly done!
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Thanks so much, Susan! 🙂
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Yes! Love it!
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Thank You! 😀 😀
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Good one!! Reminded me of a Hindi horror movie – Tumbaad
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That’s a fantastic movie! 😀 🙂
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Yes it is!! Your story of hungry father behind the door, reminded me of the cursed old hungry woman behind the door.. ☺
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Aye aye! 😀
Thank You! 🙂
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At first I thought it was “Call up Father, Lorenzo.” Upon second reading, realized what was really going on. Wonderfully scary.
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A comma makes all the difference! 🙂
Thanks so much! 😀
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Father woke up – I don’t like the sound of that! Neat little horror story.
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Thanks so much, Liz! 🙂
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Oh my, that’s a lot of responsibility for a bit of duct tape!
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Hahaha! 😉
Blessed duct tape! XD
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A chilling piece, very nice! =)
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Thanks so much, Brenda! 🙂
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A clever story, father sounds a right handful…
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Thanks so much! 🙂
Oh yes, you would not want him outside his room!!
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Frightfully good!
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Thanks so much, Sascha! 🙂
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A creepy tale. Dead father shattering glass and removing tapes?
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Yes he is! 🙂
Although not directly! 😉
Thank You! 🙂
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Dangerous hungry father asleep and mother peeling vegetables, my God, what a tale! and a priest giving spells and charms to his flock 🙂 I wouldn’t want to meet any of them. But that’s a quick smart horror story, isn’t it?
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Thanks so much for saying so Frankie! 😀 🙂
It is a terrible story to be in!! 😉
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Uh oh, Father Lorenzo better get there quick, I’m thinking!
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On the double!! 😉
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That one was scary! Loved it!
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Thanks so much, Jelli! 🙂
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This is sending shivers down my spine. Excellent. I love it.
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Thanks so much! 🙂
I am glad it had that effect!!
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Oh oh! I hope they have garlic handy!
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That they do!!
But it isn’t going to help! 😉
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Oh oh.
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Charmingly spooky.
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Thank You! 😀 🙂
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Wow, dad sounds a bit of a monster. Should they really be keeping him in the house?
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Not the smartest decision on their part..
But maybe they are compelled to! 😦
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What the chills! I wonder if the father is hungry for the vegetables or something more.
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Paper charms and an angry hungry father….. ingredients of a good scary story.
https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.com/2019/01/door.html
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Father Lorenzo needs to come up with a better way of keeping this dreaded Father away! Loved your very different take on the prompt.
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funny!
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Hahaha! 😉
Thanks, Mark! 😀
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Excellent work and you’re welc
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welcome
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