Finally, he had found it. It was exactly as he had seen in his visions – A pathway of steps leading to cabin in the woods. It was all for her. It had been a week since he had first seen her in his vision. Dressed in a black gown, she climbed the pathway, ever so gracefully. Midway, she looked behind her back, giving him a glimpse of her pale face and her fiery blue eyes that would pierce his soul. His intense desire for her had led him here.
Those blue eyes. They had set his heart on fire.
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I’m not sure this is a story of romance as it first appears, something darker going on I think.
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Something sinister may be brewing here!
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I’m liking this, a lot.
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Sounds like he’s stalking her. Very chilling. Great story.
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What colour were his mother’s eyes, I wonder…
Good story of obsession.
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His mother’s eyes were a soothing green!
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Something unpleasant is about to occur methinks! Intriguing.
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Unpleasant and sinister maybe, but something interesting for sure! š
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Dear Dark Netizen,
Sounds more like obsession than love. She’d best run.
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Shalom,
Rochelle
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It is an obsession, yes! š
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Is this the other side of Penny’s story… I have a feeling that she is armed and dangerous.
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That’s a nice thought, Brudberg! š
It does fit in!
He is in for trouble, for sure! š
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Definitely something potentially sinister going on here! Nice take on the photo prompt.
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WOW! Great visual… and provocative! Well done! ā¤
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What a troubling scene you’ve described… this has stalker written all over it… though I am sure he would call it something else.
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Oh yes! This is so much more than mere stalking!
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Love the ambiguity. Is it romance? Seems like at least one of them is dangerous.
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Romance, no!
For now, it is an obsession! She definitely is dangerous! š
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The cabin looks soothing and relaxing away from everything and everyone. Loved it.
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Why do I have a feeling that she has caught a lot of prey with her dangerously blue eyes! Nice take!
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Your feelings serve you well! š
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I don’t know if he should follow her, but I want to know more about her character!!! Well done!
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Well, he definitely is going to be in trouble! š
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I don’t think things are quite right here – first I hoped whoever has the blue eyes keeps well away from this gentleman. But then I thought, maybe she is the dangerous one. Intriguing take. Strangers meeting in a remote cabin. What could possibly go wrong?
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She is quite dangerous! š
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Wow! Breathtaking, and I don’t know if he’s smart to follow such a vision. Fiery eyes? Hmmmmm.
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He is definitely making a mistake!
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